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EMERGENT TALENT:

            The Chickasaw Plum is pleased to feature the short story, “Diabetic Murder” by Terrance Huiskens. Terrance also has an entry in the poetry section of this issue of the Plum called “Tepid Days.”

            Terrance is a 20-year-old from Bay City, Michigan. His day job is working as an EMT for an ambulance company there. Terrance is also a student, working toward a degree in liberal studies. The well-considered short story, “Diabetic Murder” and his nostalgic poem “Tepid Days” in the poetry section constitute Terrance’s first publications.

            Thanks for the submissions, Terrance, and keep writing!  

 


 

Diabetic Murder

Terrance Huiskens

 

I was out on my front porch sweeping off debris caused by a storm we had the night before. The guy on the TV was warning his viewers that a tornado was likely, but it turned out to be just a harsh windstorm. As I was just finishing up, the mail carrier walked up the few stairs and handed me an advertisement and a few letters. We chatted for a bit then he went on to the next house. It wasn't long after, as I was shooing a stray tabby away, I heard the mailman and the neighbor a few doors down arguing, or rather, I heard the neighbor shouting.

 

"SON OF A B****,” the neighbor screamed. "YOU F***ING PEOPLE.”

 

"Sir, I delivered it yesterday," the mailman replied.

 

“AH NAW! DON’T YOU GIVE ME THAT .TWO DAYS AGO IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN HERE! RIGHT HERE,” he started stomping on his front steps. “I WANT IT NOW!”

 

“Sir, I’ve had enough of this. I put them right on your doorstep. If you can’t find them, I don’t know what to tell you. Good day.”

 

            The mailman began walking to the next house and the neighbor staggered down his driveway after him. He stopped and reached in the back of his pickup and pulled out a long piece of wood; a 2x4 from what I could tell. He started staggering more rapidly towards the mailman, shouting: "COME HERE. COME BACK HERE." The mailman paid absolutely no attention and kept walking. I, too, forgot about the blundering drunk. The whole town, and I mean the whole town knew the type of person he was. Being tossed on his haunches out of bars nearly everyday, being picked up by the local cops for various illicit acts; just a run of the mill drunk. Drunks are a dime a dozen in this town, but this guy, everyone knew. Little short guy, no more than a hundred pounds soak and wet, but boy did he have a mouth on him.

 

            I shook my head and started on inside the house when I heard a horrible sound of pain that for a minute, I thought would make my ears bleed. I turned to where the sound originated and saw the neighbor drumming the mailman with the 2x4. Over and over he whapped the poor guy. The screaming was ebbing, and after a few more hits it was gone entirely. I immediately ran into my house and dialed 911. I told them what had happened, and what was, to the best of my knowledge still happening. They asked me to wait in the house ‘til the police arrived; I told them to hurry. When I hung the phone up I decided not to listen to the woman and went back outside. By that time the neighbor had apparently gone back to his house. Being that I was in no apparent danger I ran over to the beaten man. From a distance I could see that he lay in a large pool of blood that trickled down the narrow sidewalk and gathered in the little cracks. I tried to wake him, but he wouldn’t budge. When I checked his breathing there was none; I immediately began CPR. I was at the end of the first cycle when the police and ambulance rolled up. The paramedics took over. As I watched them work on the man, an officer came over to me and asked what had happened.

 

“The guy that did it is in that house over there,” I pointed. “He just ran up and started hitting him.”

 

"Is he still in there?" The officer asked.

 

"As far as I know."

 

            The officer I talked with and four other officers went to the house and started banging on the door. "POLICE, OPEN UP." The officers started motioning like they were going to kick the door down: pointer finger, middle finger, and finally his ring finger, and with their guns drawn busted down the door. "GET ON THE GROUND, GET ON THE GROUND." I heard the officers yell.

 

            About five minutes later they brought the guy out in handcuffs and put him in the back of one of their cars. One of the officers went to the ambulance where they already had the mailman and were working on him. He asked something to the paramedic, I couldn’t exactly hear what, but I knew the response wasn’t good because the officer started shaking his head. He came back over to me and asked a few more questions so

he could write a detailed report. When he was all done I asked how the mailman was doing. He couldn’t by law divulge to me the mailman’s condition, but he gave me a look that told me all I needed to know. While the officer jotted down the information on my license I stood there looking around, wondering what could cause someone to do what the drunk did. I decided I’d take my chances and ask the officer what the guy had to say for himself.

 

“Officer,” I said. “Did he say why he did it?”

 

“Apparently a box of insulin needles was the cause of this.” he shook his head, handed back my license. “We found them lying in a bush a few feet from his front door. I guess the storm the night before blew them there.”

 

“The mail comes in the day,“ I said, confused. “The storm didn’t happen ‘til last night.”

 

“Yeah,” the officer stated, like a question.

 

 “So why didn’t the guy get them then?”

 

“He was in jail. Got let out today; two hours before all this.”

 

 

 

 

The Chickasaw Plum  -  Volume III - Number 7 - July 2006

 

 

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